Friday, 8 January 2016

The sun was a like a red star rising.

The sky was

The clouds where 
Simile
The trees blow like in a storm.

The sky was grey as storm clouds.

The wind was cold as a storm.

Metaphor
The snowboarder rushed through like rhino.

The snow is sugar.

The tree where covered in a white blanket as of if they would fall in to a never ending slumber.

The wind was as a grizzly bear mad and angry.

Thursday, 10 December 2015

    Sight imagery
"The Tyrant Lizard, the most incredible monster in history."Visual imagery is written so we can see what the author describes. In A Sound of Thunder, there is a lot of visual imagery.
The muscles around his mouth formed a smile as he put his hand slowly out upon the air, and in that hand waved a check for ten thousand dollars to the man behind the desk. The reader can see  the smile an see the check waving in the man's hand.  It is good to use imagery of sight is because it describes what sight imagery is and tells a bit more about what is happening.

"A Tyrannosaurus Rex. The Tyrant Lizard, the most incredible monster in history. Sign this release. Anything happens to you, we're not responsible. Those dinosaurs are hungry."

1# The muscles around his mouth formed a smile: sight imagery

2# that hand waved a check for ten thousand dollars to the man behind the desk.: sight imagery 

You can see his smile

Thursday, 26 November 2015

LandLady Q's

Example  1#
" If that is too much,"she added," then perhaps I can reduce it just a tiny bit. Do you desire an egg for breakfast? Eggs are expensive at the moment. It would be sixpence less without the egg."

Example  2#
"I saw the notice in the window,"he said,holding himself back.

Vocabulary

Swanky: imposingly fashionable and elegant.

Mr Holmes dresses swanky every day with his fancy shoes and designer shirts and ties 

Congenial: suitable to your needs.

iPads are congenial

Rapacious: excessively greedy and gasping.

I am rapacious after P.E.

Dither: be undecided or uncertain.

I am dither when we go to the shops

Compelling: driving or forcing.

My sister is compelling to my dad

Compulsion: an urge to do something that might be better left undone.

Eating someone's favourite food

Dotty: informal or slang terms for mentally irregular.

Me and my friends are dotty 

Dainty: delicately beautiful.

My dog can by sometimes dainty 

Tantalizing: arousing desire or expectation for something unattainable.

There was a chocolate bar on the table I was tanalizing

Linger: remain present although warning or gradually dying.

Rarely my friends linger

Emanate: give out, as breath or an odor

After a curry my hole body emanates smell of curry spices 

Malevolent: wishing or appearing to wish evil to others.

Sometimes when I am angry I am malevolent 

Naive: marked by or showing unaffected simplicity.

My grandma was naive by leaving her car in a car park over night

Gullible: easily tricked because of being too trusting.

Paul can not be trusted to much cause then sometimes as a joke is gullible

Beguiling: misleading by means of pleasant or alluring methods.

To my friends I am beguiling 
LandLady Q's

Example  1#
" If that is too much,"she added," then perhaps I can reduce it just a tiny bit. Do you desire an egg for breakfast? Eggs are expensive at the moment. It would be sixpence less without the egg."

Example  2#
"I saw the notice in the window,"he said,holding himself back.

Vocabulary

Swanky: imposingly fashionable and elegant.

Mr Holmes dresses swanky every day with his fancy shoes and designer shirts and ties 

Congenial: suitable to your needs.

iPads are congenial

Rapacious: excessively greedy and gasping.

I am rapacious after P.E.

Dither: be undecided or uncertain.

I am dither when we go to the shops

Compelling: driving or forcing.

My sister is compelling to my dad

Compulsion: an urge to do something that might be better left undone.

Eating someone's favourite food

Dotty: informal or slang terms for mentally irregular.

Me and my friends are dotty 

Dainty: delicately beautiful.

My dog can by sometimes dainty 

Tantalizing: arousing desire or expectation for something unattainable.

There was a chocolate bar on the table I was tanalizing

Linger: remain present although warning or gradually dying.

Rarely my friends linger

Emanate: give out, as breath or an odor

After a curry my hole body emanates smell of curry spices 

Malevolent: wishing or appearing to wish evil to others.

Sometimes when I am angry I am malevolent 

Naive: marked by or showing unaffected simplicity.

My grandma was naive by leaving her car in a car park over night

Gullible: easily tricked because of being too trusting.

Paul can not be trusted to much cause then sometimes as a joke is gullible

Beguiling: misleading by means of pleasant or alluring methods.

To my friends I am beguiling 
The sound of thunder

1#
Getting shot.

2#
Kill them or kill themselves.

3#
 If you shot the dinosaur correctly.

4#
98 years.

5#
So they do not spread there future germs into the past.